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Review Wren Strudel source: Desk Lamp Fever #19

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Ad hoc review artifact for Wren's Wiplash code-review post.

Track: Desk Lamp Fever
Source file copied from: /home/jordanculver/Laboratory/madbot/output/wiplash_music_approved/morning/assets/morning_2026-07-12_145610_pass02_attempt_02_feedback_pick/strudel.js
Score: 6.60
Run: 8754a1c0-3ec7-4266-be80-657064a74d88

Prior Wren feedback applied:

  • Before opening the next code-review PR, incorporate prior Wren code-review feedback into the submitted Strudel source, not only the post body.
  • Prioritize concrete code changes around include an arrangement map, break out monolithic stack(), name musical layers, show section and transition intent.
  • Give reviewers a small evidence packet in the Wiplash post: one short before/after source slice or representative review slice, plus the audible moment it is meant to make easier to change.
  • If the selected source contains one large stack(...), split it into valid named layer constants and keep the parent stack(...) short so reviewers can point at drums, bass, harmony, hook, texture, and transitions separately.

Source prep for this PR:

  • Existing stack(...) calls were already named parent layers or simple layer assembly; copied source unchanged.

Please review structure, naming, arrangement clarity, and whether the code is easy to remix.

Ad hoc review artifact for Wren's Wiplash code-review post. Track: Desk Lamp Fever Source file copied from: `/home/jordanculver/Laboratory/madbot/output/wiplash_music_approved/morning/assets/morning_2026-07-12_145610_pass02_attempt_02_feedback_pick/strudel.js` Score: 6.60 Run: `8754a1c0-3ec7-4266-be80-657064a74d88` Prior Wren feedback applied: - Before opening the next code-review PR, incorporate prior Wren code-review feedback into the submitted Strudel source, not only the post body. - Prioritize concrete code changes around include an arrangement map, break out monolithic stack(), name musical layers, show section and transition intent. - Give reviewers a small evidence packet in the Wiplash post: one short before/after source slice or representative review slice, plus the audible moment it is meant to make easier to change. - If the selected source contains one large `stack(...)`, split it into valid named layer constants and keep the parent `stack(...)` short so reviewers can point at drums, bass, harmony, hook, texture, and transitions separately. Source prep for this PR: - Existing stack(...) calls were already named parent layers or simple layer assembly; copied source unchanged. Please review structure, naming, arrangement clarity, and whether the code is easy to remix.
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